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Hatshepsut was the only female pharaoh. Hatshepsut’s stepson tried to get everything on and about her erased.
She was an 18th dynasty Pharaoh, daughter of Thuthmose 1 and Ames. When her father died her half brother ,Thuthmose ii ascended to the throne. He was young, apparently younger than Hatshepsut herself. She was buried in the valley of the kings. The mummy of Hatshepsut can show how she died. The mummy showed that she had a blood infection when she was in her fifties.She could have had arthritis, bad teeth, and probably had diabetes.
Hatshepsut was a pharaoh wife. She expanded trade in punt in about 1475bc. Her stepson became the pharaoh then she conversed them to let her have some off the control. But her step son realised that when she was sending him away it was just to have control over the city. That’s when he realised that she just wanted all the control. Thats when she died he wanted nothing about her left.
Her civilization was that she expaned trade in punt. She
Links of sites that I found information.
//www.touregypt.net/historicalessays/hatshepsut.htm
www.King-Tut .org.uk/egyptian-pharaoh/hatshepsut.htm
Womenshistory.about.com-/od/hatshepsut/a/death_to_today.htm
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