Bad Day

This is a poem that we had to write today.

Today is a bad day

because nobody cares

They tell me to go away

But they just don’t understand

Today is a very bad day

The bully took my lunch money

When I told, she gave me a black eye

On the way home she pushed me into the mud

So that is why today is a very bad day. I hope you like my poem.

~ by makaylak22 on January 21, 2010.

2 Responses to “Bad Day”

  1. Good poem I like it but there is not that much rhyming words.

  2. I like your poem. I can kind of picture it where it talks about the black eye, the lunch thing and the bad day part.

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